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06-28-2016, 07:45 AM

(06-27-2016, 03:02 PM)Jokster908 Wrote: Thanks! My character should be done soon(I hope it's good enough >.>)

Everything was fine, except the last couple of lines where you mention something about a band of thieves and secret grove with a wyvern. They just felt like you added them in as afterthoughts to me.

"Oh and by the way he's a bandit leader and has a wyvern kthxbai"

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Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 03-20-2014, 12:36 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedchain - 03-27-2014, 03:06 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Felly - 05-17-2014, 10:10 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 05-18-2014, 06:05 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cevian - 05-20-2014, 07:54 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 05-20-2014, 11:16 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Alusq - 05-20-2014, 08:39 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cevian - 05-20-2014, 11:39 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 05-21-2014, 01:14 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cevian - 05-21-2014, 09:56 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 05-21-2014, 11:10 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cevian - 05-21-2014, 11:46 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 05-22-2014, 01:23 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cevian - 05-22-2014, 01:28 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 05-22-2014, 05:13 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cevian - 05-22-2014, 02:09 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 05-22-2014, 05:35 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cevian - 05-22-2014, 06:17 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 05-27-2014, 02:29 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 05-27-2014, 03:46 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cevian - 05-30-2014, 09:44 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Amoltamiss - 06-03-2014, 09:18 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 06-04-2014, 07:26 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Ghost of Elibe Lost - 06-04-2014, 09:46 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 06-04-2014, 10:12 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Ghost of Elibe Lost - 06-04-2014, 06:05 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 06-04-2014, 09:17 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by sirocyl - 06-24-2014, 11:12 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Gazetteer - 06-24-2014, 11:24 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Alusq - 06-04-2014, 01:12 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Velyoukai - 06-04-2014, 09:32 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Amoltamiss - 06-05-2014, 01:54 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 06-05-2014, 03:54 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 06-08-2014, 12:05 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Gazetteer - 06-23-2014, 10:25 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Flying Magic User - 06-24-2014, 12:11 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 06-24-2014, 05:50 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 06-25-2014, 03:04 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by CatDotJayPeg - 06-26-2014, 12:07 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Gazetteer - 06-26-2014, 01:32 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by FireEmblemFreak - 07-05-2014, 06:28 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Toogee - 07-05-2014, 09:13 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 07-05-2014, 09:54 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 07-10-2014, 01:31 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Mizu - 07-12-2014, 01:53 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by sirocyl - 07-24-2014, 11:44 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Mizu - 07-25-2014, 03:00 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 07-12-2014, 05:17 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 07-12-2014, 06:25 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Deathspike - 07-15-2014, 06:07 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by sirocyl - 07-19-2014, 07:24 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Breadophile - 07-20-2014, 02:48 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 07-20-2014, 12:17 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by EvilG - 07-20-2014, 01:19 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by TheAstronomicon - 07-20-2014, 10:54 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Breadophile - 07-21-2014, 09:02 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 08-23-2014, 10:37 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 08-26-2014, 09:23 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 08-31-2014, 04:51 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Val Ritz - 09-04-2014, 05:36 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Myke - 09-04-2014, 06:56 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 09-05-2014, 11:31 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Myke - 09-08-2014, 06:53 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by ScarletFlame - 09-13-2014, 01:19 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 09-30-2014, 08:50 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 10-12-2014, 12:55 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 10-23-2014, 05:11 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Emerald Wyvern - 12-23-2014, 06:36 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by keyofw - 12-27-2014, 11:09 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedchain - 12-28-2014, 12:07 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by phantomvictini - 02-02-2015, 04:11 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Airra - 02-07-2015, 11:36 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 02-13-2015, 12:12 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cynon - 02-23-2015, 12:25 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 02-23-2015, 02:21 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cynon - 02-23-2015, 03:01 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 02-23-2015, 10:46 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cynon - 02-25-2015, 04:35 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 02-26-2015, 12:09 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Cynon - 02-26-2015, 03:16 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 02-26-2015, 07:00 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by TheAstronomicon - 04-13-2015, 11:40 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 04-22-2015, 01:59 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by fensti - 06-09-2015, 10:37 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by LincolnTheArcher - 06-09-2015, 06:31 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by fensti - 06-10-2015, 01:01 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Jack - 06-11-2015, 01:38 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 06-22-2015, 05:28 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by TheAstronomicon - 08-08-2015, 07:00 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Pura - 09-01-2015, 07:29 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 09-04-2015, 12:14 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Unsung Hero - 09-05-2015, 11:34 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedchain - 09-12-2015, 12:45 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by A Working Man - 09-29-2015, 03:53 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedchain - 10-02-2015, 03:51 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by fensti - 11-11-2015, 11:40 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Jonahman10 - 12-30-2015, 08:57 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 12-30-2015, 09:01 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 01-28-2016, 05:30 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by MitsuriZX - 01-29-2016, 10:29 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 01-31-2016, 09:49 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Rock - 03-03-2016, 12:59 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by dreamsleever - 03-10-2016, 01:51 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Zanryu - 03-12-2016, 06:09 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 03-10-2016, 04:04 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 03-10-2016, 09:26 AM

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RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by FireUmbreon - 04-05-2016, 04:48 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 04-06-2016, 11:25 AM

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RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Kitsune - 04-13-2016, 03:41 PM

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RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 04-15-2016, 09:20 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Kitsune - 04-15-2016, 11:58 AM

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RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Veradux - 04-22-2016, 04:36 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by MMM - 04-22-2016, 04:46 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Falaflame - 04-22-2016, 04:45 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Veradux - 04-29-2016, 07:05 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 04-29-2016, 08:28 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 05-23-2016, 08:44 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 05-24-2016, 07:32 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 06-22-2016, 08:04 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 05-24-2016, 11:20 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 05-24-2016, 11:33 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by MMM - 06-23-2016, 05:33 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Speedy - IX - 06-24-2016, 12:53 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Swift_Assassin - 06-24-2016, 12:57 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by MMM - 06-24-2016, 03:31 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Jokster908 - 06-25-2016, 07:06 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by MMM - 06-26-2016, 06:18 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 06-27-2016, 01:13 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Jokster908 - 06-26-2016, 10:45 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Jokster908 - 06-27-2016, 03:02 PM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by WyvernSlayer - 06-28-2016, 07:45 AM

RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Jokster908 - 06-28-2016, 11:45 AM

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RE: New? Going on hiatus? Leaving? - by Jokster908 - 06-28-2016, 04:58 PM

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