07-13-2014, 04:40 PM
These are very good for being your first attempts!
Cecily is very clean, the most glaring thing to me being the fact that there's now a young girl's head (Nino) on a grown woman's body (Eleanora), making her neck look huge. Any combination of shortening the neck by a few pixels, making the body slightly smaller, or making the head slightly larger may get you some mileage on making everything fit together.
IX already mentioned the hair quirk; more shading under the hair might make it look more natural.
I suggest using the blue colors of Cecily's eyes for the darker colors of the white robe.
Neil's neck is slightly long as well, and IX mentioned the other issues. The clothing does its job, but I encourage you to do more with it to differentiate it from Rath's.
Cecily is very clean, the most glaring thing to me being the fact that there's now a young girl's head (Nino) on a grown woman's body (Eleanora), making her neck look huge. Any combination of shortening the neck by a few pixels, making the body slightly smaller, or making the head slightly larger may get you some mileage on making everything fit together.
IX already mentioned the hair quirk; more shading under the hair might make it look more natural.
I suggest using the blue colors of Cecily's eyes for the darker colors of the white robe.
Neil's neck is slightly long as well, and IX mentioned the other issues. The clothing does its job, but I encourage you to do more with it to differentiate it from Rath's.